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First shot of protagonist asleep in a bed –
close-up of a phone ringing and the character rolling over to answer it
·
Protagonist bathed in shadow, long shot of him
sitting on the edge of his bed
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Voiceover: “Alex, they’ve taken her.”
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Extreme close-up of the handle of a gun
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Protagonist grabs the gun, focus pulls out
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Long shot of the character walking out of the
door – fade to black
·
Zooming out from a close-up of sign to a long
shot of the protagonist walking past the New Scotland Yard building with
voiceover
·
“Good morning, everyone. For those of you who
don’t know, I’m Chief Superintendent Adams.”
·
Cut to meeting room – mid shot of new Chief Sup.
Adams as she speaks to her new team of Detective Inspectors
·
Voiceover interspersed with cutscenes to the
group of detectives listening and some fast-editing of a van pulling up on the
pavement next to a small girl
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“We’ve had an incident this morning. An
eight-year-old girl has been taken from outside her school. Her father is the
new CEO of IBM, so we assume ransom. We’ll be keeping this quiet – it hasn’t
hit the public yet. Shaw, you’re heading this one. Let’s go.”
·
Cut to protagonist and his boss arguing in the
same office later in the day:
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“Chief, please, give me this case.”
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“Just stop. You’re a relative. It’s not going to
happen.”
·
“But Chief—”
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“Listen, it’s in Shaw’s capable hands. Relax.”
·
Cut to a dim long shot of the protagonist and
his brother on a balcony. Protagonist says: “I’ll find her.”
·
Cue fast-paced shots of walking, research,
tensions rising
·
Long shot of protagonist in an alleyway with a
brown envelope
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Close-up of him pulling a picture from the
envelope
·
Long shot of protagonist finding a group of
people in another alley – a few leave but one, the one in the picture, remains
·
Protagonist says: “I need to know about the
Hudson kid.”
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“I don’t know anything.”
·
Close-up of the man’s face as protagonist pins
him to the wall, gun-to-head, saying, “Are you sure?”
·
Fade to black
·
Fast-paced editing of long shots, protagonist
running down the road with the alleyway stranger’s voiceover: “There’s got to
be someone on the inside.”
·
Long shot of protagonist bursting into his boss’s
office with picture ‘evidence’: “I think he’s involved.”
·
Close-up of Adams: “You’ve had it in for him
since the start. Give me your badge and go home.”
Now this shows much more detail and will be invaluable for you. Good progress is seen in your planning after hearing advice from your wise teacher :)
ReplyDeleteHeh, very wise indeed... This plan's already been really useful for timelines, so I'm definitely glad of it.
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